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22.8.10

can't decide

mmmm....this is what happens when i'm meant to be doing working drawings... i say no more :)

its most likely the front page of my treatise book by the way...



but im not sure if the text reads well enough...
so i made the colours a tad darker and less saturated... but now i think it loses something something warm... i cant decide ???? do i sacrifice legibility for atmosphere........hmmmmmmmmmmmmm?????



o it started out purple btw... but i dont like it.... not dirty enough...

2 comments:

  1. they all great!:)well done! I personally prefer the 2nd one though, i feel the first is great but a bit busy, the second is easily read and carries your identity beautifully! But really, they all stunning*

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  2. thankyou thankyou.... i think i will follow your advice... :)
    dont lie!!! the purple one is disgusting... :)

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